Story opportunities pop up everywhere. All you have to do is cross the bridge. |
Unique Challenges
Historic novel writing presents many unique challenges. Foremost, the writer didn't personally live during that time era, or he/she lived in New York but loved writing about the Old West.
Slick documentaries and photos often don’t go far enough to immerse the writer or the reader in the “feel” of that particular slot of time. It helps to find journals or other written material to base the needed atmosphere of the novel upon, but the REAL STORIES come from the mouths of those who lived them.
Blackberry Road, my latest novel, is a snapshot of a hot summer in 1934 Oklahoma. A girl called Biddy narrates a whopping tale of murder and spookiness that begins in May when school is out and ends when the blackberries are turning brown on the vine – about mid- to late-summer. Biddy’s family jumps right out at you like a real family, and why is that?
Because they are, and someone (me) didn’t let their stories die.
Turning 'Real' into Fiction
Collecting family stories, recipes, lore, and copying old handwritten Bible notes over the years created the realistic backdrop for Blackberry Road. Fictional Biddy has twelve brothers and sisters. My mother had eleven. Both Biddys, the fictional and the real, were from sharecropping families living in Oklahoma in the 1930s.
Dirt poor, but rock solid, those families had to eat, live, and survive everything from snake bites to drought (or flood) to miserable housing conditions.
In my particular case, I was fortunate to mingle and mix with a real sharecropping family because they were my own relatives. You can be sure the stories at our reunions or get-togethers flew around like greased spitballs; and there I was, in the thick of it, laughing and asking questions, my pen flying over the notebook I kept with me at all times.
Most members of the real Blackberry Road family have now passed on, but their lives and experiences will live on forever simply because I didn’t let the stories die. My job as a writer was to make fiction seem like reality and reality seem like fiction.
You can do the same thing.
No Family Stories to Collect? No Problem!
Don’t despair if you don’t have actual family stories to gather. Story opportunities full of "nuggets" pop up everywhere. All you have to do is cross the bridge, so to speak, and be ready to take notes.
A chance to record stories “from the horse’s mouth” is as close as that elderly lady you see every day on the bus. Befriend her and see life as it was through her eyes. Maybe it’s a
friend’s uncle who served in the military and lived through stories that seem too fictional to be true but are true just the same. A person volunteering for a church street choir used to be homeless many years ago – what was that like, and how did he or she escape homelessness? The Vietnamese family down the street who barely made it to the USA in 1971 – how did they do it, and what happened when they got here?
Your friend tells you she has a grandfather who was a butler in the deep South in the early 1950s. Wow! Can you go see him and make sure his stories don’t die? You don’t know until you try, right?
Living stories are waiting for you to discover, record, and save. Now . . . go write that novel!
~ Three old stories that didn’t die ~
“It was my job to lead my blind grandma to the outhouse, and I would read the Sears and Roebuck catalog to her while I waited. That’s how, when I was ten years old, I got the second doll of my childhood. We read about her in the catalog, and she cost 95-cents. Grandma bought it for me for taking such good care of her. I thought my doll was the most beautiful thing in the world. She had rubber bloomers, and I kept her hung up on a wall. In those days, we didn’t have screens on most of the windows and some grasshoppers got hold of those rubber bloomers and ate them up. I had to kill those varmints for doing that!”
~ the real Biddy
One night, a pretty young woman *we’ll call her Doodles* from our family went to a local dance with her older brothers. A catty and foolish young woman became jealous of Doodles’ beauty. Throughout the evening, the woman heckled her, making verbal innuendos and snide remarks. Doodles ignored her bully, dancing and promenading around the dance floor. Later, as Doodles started home under the full moon with her brothers, the woman hid and threw rocks at her as she passed. It was too much. Doodles marched into the bushes and took the girl to the ground with enough vigor to make all her seven brothers and one of her sisters very proud. During the scuffle, the band scuttled outside in the glittery moonlight and played a lively rendition of Don’t Let the Stars Get In Your Eyes. Needless to say, 16-year-old Doodles had no more trouble from this hateful woman, and this became an energetic and favorite story at all the family reunions for years to come ~ Jodi Lea Stewart
Jodi, this is a great post--and I love the ideas you've given readers about how to collect stories and use them in their writing. How I wish I'd listened more to my mom--she talked a LOT about when she was growing up, and reminded me so much of Biddy when I was reading your BLACKBERRY ROAD. I would love to put what I remember of what she told me down and have it in writing for my kids and any future generations that might be interested.
ReplyDeleteReally vibrant and entertaining tales. I'm so glad you kept them alive. These need to be told.
ReplyDeleteIt was a joy to share these stories as background for my murder mystery, C.A. It's true that sometimes reality seems more fictional than fiction. The story of Tommy in BLACKBERRY ROAD is an example of that -- it's 100 percent true, yet it seems impossible. That's just another example of not letting the stories die.
DeleteJodi, when I got to the part about Tommy, I literally gasped out loud. I knew it had to be true. There was no way that could be made up! LOL
DeleteYou are very intuitive. Yes, it's sure enough true, and our real "Tommy" was grateful his whole life for that miracle.
DeleteThanks so much, Cheryl. I'm delighted that you "see" your mom's life somewhat played out in BLACKBERRY ROAD. I would love to have had her opinion of this novel! The personal touch of history lives inside our older generations. I hope this blog will inspire others to never let their stories die. Thanks for stopping by!
ReplyDeleteJodi,
ReplyDeleteIt's so important not to lose family stories. A few years before my dad died, he attended a memorial service for one of my uncles. At this get-together, my dad and his older brother recorded close to two hours of family stories about their childhood. My mom has been making notes of her childhood and growing up memories and experiences, and I've taken copious notes when she gets to reminiscing.
It sounds like you have a treasure trove, Kaye! Whether you put them as background in a work of fiction or write a non-fictional essay or book, those stories are like gold. Good for you for keeping the stories alive!
DeleteYou never fail to bring stories to life. I love that you honor and save those stories. They are special. Here's to more stories to come. Doris
ReplyDeleteThank you, Doris, and thanks for stopping by to share with us!
DeleteJodi, my love,
ReplyDeleteI just wish you were aware of a storybthat may interest you. Maybe I'll tell you. Maaybe.
I love you.
Larry